Post by fairchild.txt on Jul 3, 2019 3:57:02 GMT
last edited Jul 3, 2019 19:03:48 GMT by fairchild.txt
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posted Jul 3, 2019 13:52:43 GMT
Post by Reya Starlyght on Jul 3, 2019 13:52:43 GMT
So, a few comments.
This sounds like you've written it as one technique, however the first part, "Upon activation the blade is imbued with the power of darkness, giving it empowered strikes in the form of additional [LETHAL] damage of [DARK] element each time it touches another being, other than the sword's master" is already what would be considered the maximum for a rank 7 technique. In this case, you can have it have either a duration of 5 posts and a cooldown of 3 posts or a duration of 4 posts and a cooldown of 2 posts, given that it is an item not a technique that is a part of a magic.
This part, "Additionally, for the duration, the wielder can expel a blast of [DARK] energy in a 5m radius of the sword, dealing [CRITICAL] damage to other beings in that radius" will have to be another technique, right now you have it written as rank 6. For reduced pricing, you could have it only be able to be activated while the other tech is active, right now I would be okay if it could occur on the first and last post of the sword's first technique were that the case. I'm not entirely sure if you'd be able to afford it at rank 6 right now, however feel free to talk with me about pricing if that is a concern of yours.
Also, I forgot to mention this earlier, but I'd like to see some dimensions and weight for the katana, at least its length for the former as that will help determine what exactly its reach is.
This sounds like you've written it as one technique, however the first part, "Upon activation the blade is imbued with the power of darkness, giving it empowered strikes in the form of additional [LETHAL] damage of [DARK] element each time it touches another being, other than the sword's master" is already what would be considered the maximum for a rank 7 technique. In this case, you can have it have either a duration of 5 posts and a cooldown of 3 posts or a duration of 4 posts and a cooldown of 2 posts, given that it is an item not a technique that is a part of a magic.
This part, "Additionally, for the duration, the wielder can expel a blast of [DARK] energy in a 5m radius of the sword, dealing [CRITICAL] damage to other beings in that radius" will have to be another technique, right now you have it written as rank 6. For reduced pricing, you could have it only be able to be activated while the other tech is active, right now I would be okay if it could occur on the first and last post of the sword's first technique were that the case. I'm not entirely sure if you'd be able to afford it at rank 6 right now, however feel free to talk with me about pricing if that is a concern of yours.
Also, I forgot to mention this earlier, but I'd like to see some dimensions and weight for the katana, at least its length for the former as that will help determine what exactly its reach is.